This one really looks great! (It’s now including a taste of design side information that the original PRU writeup contained, and the walk through on the first prints …just right! And the graphics look fantastic!)
Only one thing I noticed was a duplication of information on pages 21, 22 and 30, 31, 32.
(If you want to save a couple pages in the manual you could probably remove it from one spot.)
Awesome job gang!